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The Song of Two Hearts

Posted May 17th, 2008 at 10:47pm

The Song of Two Hearts: The words of true love are lost with words of fear and confusion and yet two passionate hearts find a way to dismantle the troubled fears of unwilling surroundings that pick away at helpless romantics that dream the sweetest dreams. As our hearts sing out to one another the sounds are dwindled and muffled before we ever hear the truth, how sad our songs become when joy is all that is wanted. How dare!... troubled misfortunes turn on such sweet dreamers. Pushed away by fear and mistrust tears drowned their confused bodies bound down by chains of unknown knowledge. The touch of darkness is all they felt. Breaking through with power to great for any evil, both hearts beat faster and create a better song filled with joy and wonders that needed so much to be freed into the air the beat flows its vibrating and pulsating waves overcome all fear, fear intended to abuse the most simple of hearts.

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csgrbr45

Female, Age Private, Hartford, CT

Posted


ur poem sounds very painful is the one person or all persons u fall in luv with that makes u feel all those things and i realize that emotion can get deep but ask urself does anyone out ther really get that luv thing because selfishness seems 2 play a big part when u hav all those things goin on in an relationship but can there be a team player out ther i doubt it i think u gotta just live and try 2 find the right person that can bring the sme amount 2 the table and work as partners 2 get more things not every woman 4 herself but ur very poetic and complex but i got the point nicely written


GorgeousOne

Female, 23, Madison, WI

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Wow...thanks for the response! :-) I will probably put up some more poetry, i just wanted to test the waters first! I love poetry with a passion!!



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